Christian, I really liked your analysis of our neighbor's quote, and how time, dedication and commitment are important factors of birth/pregnancy. Having the time in your day to attend something more then just you, is like a conflicting battle with your self, because of the sacrifices one should take. In your analysis, I feel like you could of wrote a bit more, maybe relating your first interview of your Aunt to our neighbor's interview and see how similar and how different it was, and why it may have been that way.
Sister (Protoge):
Christian, I liked your interview with our Aunt because it's something I never really thought about when a women is in her trials of pregnancy. Some of the more dominant perspectives of birth arise because it's most of the things I only know about. Something you could of improved on is further developing your analysis by relating all interviews together and seeing the similarities and differences of the interviewers and why?
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Sarah(Thinking/Writing part):
Sarah,
The differences in the interviewee's response showed that not all women see pregnancy the same, but something prompts them all to get pregnant. Throughout your blog, your analysis of each interview and how they are different or similar to the other interviews, explained how each person perception of birth is, the only thing for your next blog should be your grammar and re-reading after you post.
Good Post!
Christian
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