Tuesday, January 4, 2011

Hw - 28 Partner Comments #2

To Dean:
Dean,

Much different than the other posts I've read, your post set apart from actually visiting someone, but watching someone at a very old age act out in their normal kind of setting. Your multiple perspectives of Chuck Berry and his appearances and the way he played made it interesting and moderately humorous hence the "too old to be playing music." The only issue that I had with post was how brief your description of the concert was and the lack of deep insights. You could of talked about why you think he still performs for people at such an old age, or how desires to play music and becoming ill are connected?

Creative Post!

Christian
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To Harry:
Harry,

I liked reading your post because of the different attitude your family friend had with hospitals and exploiting it at it's best. Mentioning that he found hospital care to be horrid and that he was almost in this alone acknowledging that recovering was going to be long term. One thing that could of been more insightful is if you had asked him about what his approach was before he had a stroke compared to after having a stroke changed his thoughts on illness and dying, or even life itself?

Good Post!

Christian

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